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Clive Staples
03-21-2005, 11:22 AM
Check out my friends band musicgoon. The new song is "you stayed up." MUSICGOON (http://www.purevolume.com/musicgoon)

GuitarComet
03-21-2005, 01:26 PM
The song is good.
The recording is fair.
I liked the sound of the guitar.

Bad news, Your singer ain't makin' it!
No matter how much reverb you put on his vocals, it's still gonna suck!
Everything else seemed good.
Look for a better singer, then you'll have a listenable, marketable band.
Otherwise, get use to the garage.
(Put some lead guitar in there, will ya!?)

Keep working on it guys! :chug:

deadendsociety66
03-21-2005, 02:46 PM
I listened to a bit of the "You Stayed Up" piece. The singing is terrible. I hated it. I agree with GuitarComet on putting some lead guitar lines in there. A nice solo in there would be good. It was a different kind of rock. It had a fusion of rock/funk and soul. It was different.

:rolleyes: The singer needs to go. He's your downfall.

:thumb: I love keyboard/piano in a song. Always a plus!

Clive Staples
03-22-2005, 01:13 PM
Thanks for checking it out and giving feedback. The singer is a big part of the band. He does more than just sing, so he's staying. He's trying his best to improve the vocals. Glad you guys enjoy the music.

Kayetan
03-22-2005, 02:02 PM
Some how, I kinda liked that. You kind of remind me of both Relient K and Apollo Sunshine. I was really impressed with all of your songs. Good job.

TheSeeker625
03-22-2005, 10:47 PM
Its all good, except the singer, but hes really not that bad. Just work on it, and you should be pretty **** good soon.

Clive Staples
03-25-2005, 01:11 AM
Thanks for the feedback you guys. It's cool how it reminded you of Relient K G&L. Relient K is a good band. Continue checking it out.