Metaphysical

[Learn2beme]

"Tonight i could see the stars in your eyes.

I was lost in their beauty

your smile was like the moon

and you, the universe,

the planets,

everything known to man,

you

are everything to me"

[WarLust]

looks like a good opener but could'nt you expand on that?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

If you are in an ambient band or a mostly experimental/instrumental type band, the length of these lyrics is perfectly acceptable. It was a rather generic poem, but you don't expand on it in vast detail like the rest of these kids. I liked it.