accidental war

[irishbasketcase]

this is played mostly on an acoustic by my band's guitarist while are bassist play very lowly in the backround

Accidental war

silent screams, fill the air, but no-one hears a sound,
peaceful dreams, rarely there, bloody tears flood the ground,
sunshine doesn't always mean happy days, and we've been here before,
happieness isn't projected by the rays, and nothings fixed when there is war

chorus
what's the point of fighting when you don't know what you are fighting for,
all these people dying, does it not become a bore,
all these families crying but they just get ignored, coz it's just another day
in this accidental war.



that's all i've got so far, plz excuse spelling and grammar mistakes
this is an anti-war and anti-poverty song.

[irishbasketcase]

anyone

[blackmark]

without judging you

i know what it's about

they are less righteous than they pretend to be. they have more effective ways of fooling the people than they ever have had before.

the best band was once a irish band
when i was getting into tunes it was Bono's singing that inspired me.

hey i just joined here but i am no newby. i am telling you about listening to U2 when i was fifteen, when 'new years' day' was first on the radio. all the wars are scams they lie to trick stupid people into fightng. that is the long and short of it. where ilive, england OWNS. they cal it New England case England OWNS AMERICA. forget what they say. all the places have indian names and you know what hapened tothem. screwed by the rebels.

you have everything you need to be a great band in that one song. but they crushed that -- on tehe air waves conscious new musicians have a hard time get deals and they lie like lizards to keep it that way. they don't want the soul in the music cause people would wake up and reject them and stop wasting their power. but the Irish put the soul in punk.
its a good song love tohear it.

[irishbasketcase]

i completely agree, thanx

[irishbasketcase]

anyone else

[the_cure]

i like it. i know this isnt that helpfull, but i think it should be to the tune of the first part of Homecoming by Greenday.
8.5/10
sorry i couldnt be more helpfull.

[TrentStevens]

I think its good, i especially like
happieness isn't projected by the rays, and nothings fixed when there is war
i give it a 8/10
other than that i cant really think of anything more to say except to keep writing mor of it.

and if you get the chance crit mine
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=313159

[irishbasketcase]

thanx guys

[irishbasketcase]

keep them comin plz, crit freely

[irishbasketcase]

can anyone think of another verse for this