Cheitan's Girl

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

I'm asking that no one crit this please, I don't plan on returning a crit if I receive one.

Ben Stivers
3/8/05

Cheitan's Girl

Blow out the beauty,
Inhale your smoke.
Girls don't need to speak,
Girls don't need to breathe.

Your silver lining has faded,
All that's left are the ashes.
Glow red, and knock the embers to the floor.
Read into your heartbeats,
An angel just lost its wings.

She comes, covered in false light.
She comes to steal your breath.
Ignore the urge to rest your eyes tonight.

As fierce as ten furies,
Born into the night sky,
She'll bring you in close,
Til it's time to feed.

Don't let her take you away,
Don't let her take you away.

[--Attaboy_Skip--]

Forgive me for my asking, but if you don't want any crits then what is the point of posting this?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Personal gain.

[--Attaboy_Skip--]

Ah, gotcha.

[Sloth]

it's good to see you're still writing APS

[Witty Username]

This is not a crit.

[The_One]

Well it's simple, but I like it a lot for some reason.

8.5/10 ++ to your personal gain. :)

[aperfectool]

you are a fvcking bitch.why the fvck dou go around and shi t talk every bodys stuf youre not that great yourself

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Because the internet is magic.