DokterPeppor
03-08-2005, 06:02 PM
This is a song my bands singer wrote. It is his best work yet in my opinion. I think with the right music put to it, it would be a great song. I would like you guys to tell me what you think of it. Here it is.....This is the almost final words. The words in parenthesis are owrds that may be substituted for the current words.
Undefined
Crystal Clear, undefined
the world can't be seen, in black and white
not for him, he's not like us
each and everyday, a new way of life (he lives in the light)
Understanding his ways could be tried
but his reason's faulty, at least in your mind
give him a shot, just one try
interpret his reason, it might save a few lives
The pieces don't always fit, problems have no answer
life is not a narrow path, it drives him insane
with every new day, every single breath
he staggers and falls, with no remorse or regret
Vivid, untamed, his colors are bright
he sees the same things you do, in different light
the images in his head, hard to accept
his world upside down, but in his mind it's alright
He ponders his life, how he feels inside
he's still an outcast, will be til he dies
never viewed life the way they do, for this he is wrong
can't feel the same way they do, he strives to feel right
Chourus
He hears the lies, the thoughts they accept
just close your eyes, and count to ten
in their world of nothing, he rejects their consent
with his one last waning breath, he cries out for help
vivid, untamed, his colors are bright
he could never see, life through your eyes
his world has fallen apart
he doesn't mind, no he doesn't mind, he lives undefined
Undefined
Crystal Clear, undefined
the world can't be seen, in black and white
not for him, he's not like us
each and everyday, a new way of life (he lives in the light)
Understanding his ways could be tried
but his reason's faulty, at least in your mind
give him a shot, just one try
interpret his reason, it might save a few lives
The pieces don't always fit, problems have no answer
life is not a narrow path, it drives him insane
with every new day, every single breath
he staggers and falls, with no remorse or regret
Vivid, untamed, his colors are bright
he sees the same things you do, in different light
the images in his head, hard to accept
his world upside down, but in his mind it's alright
He ponders his life, how he feels inside
he's still an outcast, will be til he dies
never viewed life the way they do, for this he is wrong
can't feel the same way they do, he strives to feel right
Chourus
He hears the lies, the thoughts they accept
just close your eyes, and count to ten
in their world of nothing, he rejects their consent
with his one last waning breath, he cries out for help
vivid, untamed, his colors are bright
he could never see, life through your eyes
his world has fallen apart
he doesn't mind, no he doesn't mind, he lives undefined