GreenDayLova89
02-22-2005, 01:06 PM
This was my first try at free verse but it still has some rhyme in it. i dont care if you hate it i just wrote it about how i felt about a certain incident...
****ed Up Fourth
Dan, Jimmy
**** you
Why did you have to do what you did?
We knew you had something planned
but we didn't know what at the time
You asked us if we were leaving
and we said yes
then you walked away laughing
We didn't think nothing of it at the time
Erica felt something bad coming
before we left that day
but I didn't find out about that until the next day
By then it was too late
Didn't you think about what you were about to do before you did it?
Didn't you think of the consequences?
So much more could've gone wrong
but it didn't
You were the lucky ones
You only got grounded
You were lucky you got caught
You were so lucky Dan got sick
Do you regret it now?
Do you feel bad about what you did now?
Didn't you think about how your mom would act, Dan?
Did you think she'd get mad?
Well she didn't
She broke down crying and you'll never know the pain you caused us all
Jimmy, I heard you ran as the sirens came near
Did you think you'd get in trouble
so you got up and ran?
You just left your friend Dan when he needed you?
Did you think about your grandma, Jimmy?
She wouldn't have even found out about it at all
if Munn's mom hadn't given her a call
You messed up what should've been a fun day
We were having so much fun until we found out
You're so lucky I was at the hotel
cause I would've screamed and told you to go to hell
But some people weren't as lucky as me
cause they were there
Erica went and cried
She felt horrible because she sensed it earlier
and couldn't do nothing about it
You could've got kicked out you know
but you didn't you lucky hoes
Dan, where was Jeremy?
Why wasn't he with you?
What the **** was he up to?
I'm so surprised he wasn't watching you
I remember when we had to leave to go to the hospital
We were supposed to be going out to eat
but couldn't cause of you
I remember I was hot, so hot and all shaking
I wasn't sure exactly what happened to you
it was all your fault but I didn't know it then
We didn't eat til 11 at night
Dan, your mom didn't come back til 12 that night
At the time your dad was somewhere
and had to come home because of you
Is that why you did it?
Because the parents were gone
and you had access to it?
The same thing happened to me more than once
I even thought about it more than once
but I never did it
Did you do it to get attention?
If you had done that in school you would have gotten more than detention
You would have gotten expelled
instead of just hearing people yell
Would you have liked that better?
I can only guess
now because my emotions are all a mess
Actually I have no emotions at all
or too many to make a difference
I still get sick thinking about it
We all had to put up with your ****
Now five months later
No one thinks about it anymore
except me
You messed up my year
cause you had to drink that beer
My ****ed up Fourth of July
****ed Up Fourth
Dan, Jimmy
**** you
Why did you have to do what you did?
We knew you had something planned
but we didn't know what at the time
You asked us if we were leaving
and we said yes
then you walked away laughing
We didn't think nothing of it at the time
Erica felt something bad coming
before we left that day
but I didn't find out about that until the next day
By then it was too late
Didn't you think about what you were about to do before you did it?
Didn't you think of the consequences?
So much more could've gone wrong
but it didn't
You were the lucky ones
You only got grounded
You were lucky you got caught
You were so lucky Dan got sick
Do you regret it now?
Do you feel bad about what you did now?
Didn't you think about how your mom would act, Dan?
Did you think she'd get mad?
Well she didn't
She broke down crying and you'll never know the pain you caused us all
Jimmy, I heard you ran as the sirens came near
Did you think you'd get in trouble
so you got up and ran?
You just left your friend Dan when he needed you?
Did you think about your grandma, Jimmy?
She wouldn't have even found out about it at all
if Munn's mom hadn't given her a call
You messed up what should've been a fun day
We were having so much fun until we found out
You're so lucky I was at the hotel
cause I would've screamed and told you to go to hell
But some people weren't as lucky as me
cause they were there
Erica went and cried
She felt horrible because she sensed it earlier
and couldn't do nothing about it
You could've got kicked out you know
but you didn't you lucky hoes
Dan, where was Jeremy?
Why wasn't he with you?
What the **** was he up to?
I'm so surprised he wasn't watching you
I remember when we had to leave to go to the hospital
We were supposed to be going out to eat
but couldn't cause of you
I remember I was hot, so hot and all shaking
I wasn't sure exactly what happened to you
it was all your fault but I didn't know it then
We didn't eat til 11 at night
Dan, your mom didn't come back til 12 that night
At the time your dad was somewhere
and had to come home because of you
Is that why you did it?
Because the parents were gone
and you had access to it?
The same thing happened to me more than once
I even thought about it more than once
but I never did it
Did you do it to get attention?
If you had done that in school you would have gotten more than detention
You would have gotten expelled
instead of just hearing people yell
Would you have liked that better?
I can only guess
now because my emotions are all a mess
Actually I have no emotions at all
or too many to make a difference
I still get sick thinking about it
We all had to put up with your ****
Now five months later
No one thinks about it anymore
except me
You messed up my year
cause you had to drink that beer
My ****ed up Fourth of July