Apocalypse

[MetallicShineX]

Check this out, I'd like some constructive critism. Give your honest opinion.

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Where’s your sympathy when it comes to those in need
This world has become just one town
Consideration is pushed to the back of your head

Too late, it’s now all about the majority
Humanity’s past overdue, we can’t win this race

Run around this endless infinite
Everything’s deceiving and nothing’s unfamiliar
It’s the dead end for individuality
We’re on a one-way lane to the apocalypse

There’s no difference between the similarities
It’s the smiles that crosses the line
Spread far out, with nothing in between
Emptiness is as common as the air we breathe

Rest in peace at the end of this crowded, lonely lane
It’s as far as we’ll go

[AshesOfHate]

Where’s your sympathy when it comes to those in need
This world has become just one town
Consideration is pushed to the back of your head

well there is no ryming at all here


Too late, it’s now all about the majority
Humanity’s past overdue, we can’t win this race

again no ryming at all...nothing else really to say

Run around this endless infinite
Everything’s deceiving and nothing’s unfamiliar
It’s the dead end for individuality
We’re on a one-way lane to the apocalypse

no ryming

There’s no difference between the similarities
It’s the smiles that crosses the line
Spread far out, with nothing in between
Emptiness is as common as the air we breathe

Same as above

Rest in peace at the end of this crowded, lonely lane
It’s as far as we’ll go

same as above

well sorry but this wasnt good....i will give you a 2 because you did do a little more original end of the world type song....sorry man try again with this one and try to have more flow

please crit mine...Lost reality