Blonde Headed She-devil

[Nirvanainbloom190]

I was hoping for you guys to tell me what you thought of this and maybe help me revise it

She walks down the hall with her head held high
She makes this stare like she doesnt even care

I hate her i hope she dies
She gave head to Bronner and that janitor guy

**** Vice Principals
We dont need them
They all can die
Oh yes, They all can die

[ABulldog]

that was dumb. All you said is that she can die. It is short, it is boring, it is cliche. It doesn't offer me anything. I don't have to think about it. That doesn't make for good lyrics.

[saudade]

i dont think there is any possible way to improve this piece, it is simply stupid. i just hope that you were TRYING to be funny, and hoping that some fool would give you a 7 or 8 out of 10. good luck in trying to be funny one day, i hope it works out for you! :thumb:

[metaliq]

Haha head to a janitor.

It sucked. I take it you are still in middle school? If so, you shouldnt even know what head is. Jerk.

[RollerQueen]

I'm sorry but that made me chuckle. I'm not going to comment besides the fact that it made me laugh and so :).

[DrownedThought]

-10/10