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poetic_tragedy
02-19-2005, 11:15 AM
Hey I just finished a cover of John Mayer's Your Body Is A Wonderland. I'd really appreciate any input on it ... the interlude is VERY screwed up ... but yeah anyways tell me what you think.

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Trommler
02-19-2005, 12:21 PM
Not too bad a bit messy at point but well done. I like the voice man pretty nice. Keep up the good work. Good Luck with later projects.
Aramis
02-19-2005, 12:42 PM
Wow. . .I really like your voice. In all honesty, I was expecting a high-pitched pre-pubescent voice screeching the lyrics, but your voice is deep and calm with a similar sound to John Mayer's himself. I was pretty impressed with this one. . .nice work. :)
thisisromance
02-19-2005, 04:45 PM
the vocals are great, but they always seem to go a little bit too low, and sound like an annoying metal singer that tries to hard at times.... just use you're natural voice, it sounds good. by the way that wasnt meant to be an insult just a critique... its still way better than i could ever sing.
poetic_tragedy
02-19-2005, 05:04 PM
thanks everyone ... the reason the vocals may sound a bit low is because I was singing while my parents were home and I'm kind of embarrased to sing while they're here so I kept it low. Thanks for all the comments!
poetic_tragedy
02-19-2005, 06:19 PM
any other comments?
poetic_tragedy
02-19-2005, 07:47 PM
anyone?
poetic_tragedy
02-20-2005, 09:44 AM
what do u guys think of the ending? lol
Aramis
02-20-2005, 01:02 PM
Be patient and stop bumping the thread. . .you'll get responses if you just wait.
Rats!
02-21-2005, 02:21 AM
I really hate the part toward the end where the "puh puh puh..." comes in. You should leave it out because you can't do it fast enough and it sounds extremely gay. Other than that, it's pretty damn good.
poetic_tragedy
02-21-2005, 02:26 PM
lol yeah i know it sounds very VERY gay, I'm planning on taking it out ... thanks for the comment!
morrissey
02-25-2005, 05:34 AM
I'm a John Mayer fan, I enjoyed it.

The interlude was weak in the guitar playing, just keep practicing it.

Vocals were enjoyable, much better than the usual vocals around here.

The ending was, for lack of a better term, gay. It might have been the reverb thing you had going on, I'm not sure. It just didn't turn out very well.

Other than that, it was very good.