factor46
02-07-2005, 03:17 PM
Some of you may have read this lyric that I wrote awhile back, some may not have. But I have just uploaded the recorded version of it on purevolume. If you would like, please give it a listen.
http://www.purevolume.com/nickmontgomery
Here's the lyrics just in case you've never read them before. You can crit if you want. :D
Lock the Doors, the Salesmen are Coming!
Marching across the ballroom floor,
The tile so shiny, I could almost see my face.
Trapped inside a four-walled room, completely made of marble.
Now that I’m here, I might as well learn to dance.
Step by step, minute by minute,
Doing the tango by myself can’t be too difficult.
You’d think I’d be getting the hang of it by now.
But I guess some things are just meant to be left unlearned.
So help me up, I’ve fallen.
Unfortunately there’s no one to hear my exclamation,
So I think I’ll just lie here staring at the disco ball hanging from the ceiling in it’s sparkly fashion,
But the hard floor isn’t too comfortable to my head.
http://www.purevolume.com/nickmontgomery
Here's the lyrics just in case you've never read them before. You can crit if you want. :D
Lock the Doors, the Salesmen are Coming!
Marching across the ballroom floor,
The tile so shiny, I could almost see my face.
Trapped inside a four-walled room, completely made of marble.
Now that I’m here, I might as well learn to dance.
Step by step, minute by minute,
Doing the tango by myself can’t be too difficult.
You’d think I’d be getting the hang of it by now.
But I guess some things are just meant to be left unlearned.
So help me up, I’ve fallen.
Unfortunately there’s no one to hear my exclamation,
So I think I’ll just lie here staring at the disco ball hanging from the ceiling in it’s sparkly fashion,
But the hard floor isn’t too comfortable to my head.