eeeehh..... it's called- blah blah blah?

[neurotic_basket_case467]

our singer wrote this one tell us what you think;


I don't comb my hair
I don't match my socks
every single one of them has a hole
And I always liked playing with myself better than with dolls
and oh yeah.... when I smile I look like a horse

and no... I can't get any
the only thing willing to hump me
is my neighbour's husky
I can't dance
it always looks like i'm having a seizure
And I'm still wearing the same stained T-shirt
from last week's dinner
and I can't be a lady
I curse and I burp
I can't walk on high heels
and when I put make up on
I look like a drag queen
and oh yeah... I'm only cup A
Is that okay?

[the next big thing]

I don't comb my hair
I don't match my socks
It's an alright intro. Sets the tone.




every single one of them has a hole
It's reasonable, not amazin




And I always liked playing with myself better than with dolls
I like this line. funny an a bit more subtle (if you're tryin for sexual hints) a little sick too. Or you could be expainin u don't like socializing.




and oh yeah.... when I smile I look like a horse
a bit less subtle, don't ya think




and no... I can't get any
the only thing willing to hump me
is my neighbour's husky
no no no. A bit funny and sick, but i think it's crap.




I can't dance
it always looks like i'm having a seizure
hmmmm, do the actions an it might be funny.




And I'm still wearing the same stained T-shirt
from last week's dinner
and I can't be a lady
I curse and I burp
Again nothin amazin




I can't walk on high heels
If you were goin for a kind of social hierarchy metaphore thing, then well done.

If not then ignore the above




and when I put make up on
I look like a drag queen
yet again, nothin amazin.




and oh yeah... I'm only cup A
ok. yeah superficial world




Is that okay?
Good finish



The flows messed up for a song. I'd like to hear it how it's sung.

If it was re-written it could be decent.

Personally, I'd scrap it

3 out of 10

(sorry for bein harsh)

[ABulldog]

This was dumb. That's all I have to say about that.

[saudade]

i agree, probably one of the stupidest and dumbest posts i've seen on my short life on mxtabs. I feel my IQ, and every other persons IQ, dropping suddenly...