PainKiller8191
02-06-2005, 04:18 AM
Alright I'm passed all the "my life sucks, i wanna die" bull****, no more of that crap, this is my attempt at a heavier song that has a different topic
I wrote it (music and lyircs) a couple months ago with my drummer and we really love it i just wanna know what you guys think before we start playing it live.....does it even make sense to anyone else but us???
Verse 1
Yeah, ignite the day,
Don't let it fade away,
This memory will last,
You don't have a say on this one,
Crimson blood drops hit the floor,
He laughs, as he demands for more
Way out, to the depths of hell,
We all dread to hear his roar.
Chorus
Let me go,
Leave me be,
I live a life no eye can see.
Trapped inside,
Chained to the past,
It's all a spell the devil cast
Verse 2
Morning sunrise, stab me twice,
A day where evil won't entice,
Give me space, give me control,
I haven't completely sold my soul
His own assurance will take hold of him,
Until he hears my mighty scream
Bridge
Treat me as I am,
Neglect who you were, [once before],
Treat me as I am,
Don't bother to ask, what you're dying for.
Don't bother to ask, what you're dying for!
Song structure:
Insturmental Intro
Verse 1 -double time
Interlude -double time
Chorus -double time
Verse 2 -double time
Chorus -double time
Insturmental Bridge -half time
Bridge -half time
Guitar Solo -half time
Break -into double time
Guitar Solo - double time
Interlude
Guitar Solo - double time
Chorus
Break
Ending
and I'm sorta passed this too, after spending hours on hours on my voice and developing it, my writing has changed too, once i finish a song in this new chapter i'll post it
I wrote it (music and lyircs) a couple months ago with my drummer and we really love it i just wanna know what you guys think before we start playing it live.....does it even make sense to anyone else but us???
Verse 1
Yeah, ignite the day,
Don't let it fade away,
This memory will last,
You don't have a say on this one,
Crimson blood drops hit the floor,
He laughs, as he demands for more
Way out, to the depths of hell,
We all dread to hear his roar.
Chorus
Let me go,
Leave me be,
I live a life no eye can see.
Trapped inside,
Chained to the past,
It's all a spell the devil cast
Verse 2
Morning sunrise, stab me twice,
A day where evil won't entice,
Give me space, give me control,
I haven't completely sold my soul
His own assurance will take hold of him,
Until he hears my mighty scream
Bridge
Treat me as I am,
Neglect who you were, [once before],
Treat me as I am,
Don't bother to ask, what you're dying for.
Don't bother to ask, what you're dying for!
Song structure:
Insturmental Intro
Verse 1 -double time
Interlude -double time
Chorus -double time
Verse 2 -double time
Chorus -double time
Insturmental Bridge -half time
Bridge -half time
Guitar Solo -half time
Break -into double time
Guitar Solo - double time
Interlude
Guitar Solo - double time
Chorus
Break
Ending
and I'm sorta passed this too, after spending hours on hours on my voice and developing it, my writing has changed too, once i finish a song in this new chapter i'll post it