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shayne_122
02-06-2005, 01:11 AM
Here's a song I wrote when I was getting paranoid my girlfreind was gonna kill herself...

but she didnt. thank god. anyways:

(it has a very specific way of singing it, so dont worry, it souds good)

feel the thunder,
as it crashes, to the floor
that floor is covered,
by the saturated thought, of yours
i can feel it,
moving through to the edge, of my sores

my mind is spinning like the earth again
like cosmic forces as they push like one thousand men
my mind is spinning, again...
spinning, aga-in

feel the wonder,
as it crashes, through me to the floor
see the convert,
slowly as it turns into fear
i can feel it,
moving through me, to the end of the floor

my mind is spinning like the earth again
like cosmic forces as they push like one thousand men
my mind is spinning, again...
spinning, aga-in
like aquatic currents trying to push a boat out to sea
my mind is spinning, again

feel the thunder,
as it crashes, to the floor again
see the convert,
slowly as it steers near me again
I'm like the fish tasting the wind
not ready for the oncoming end
my mind is spinning again!

my mind is spinning like the earth again
like cosmic forces as they push like one thousand men
my mind is spinning, again...
spinning, aga-in
like aquatic currents trying to push a boat out to sea
my mind is spinning, again

my mind is spinning like the earth again
like cosmic forces as they push like one thousand men
my mind is spinning, again...
spinning, aga-in
like aquatic currents trying to push a boat out to sea
my mind is spinning, again

crit plz

jmusic4every
02-06-2005, 12:56 PM
it's pretty cool!!! 7/10

shayne_122
02-06-2005, 11:31 PM
it's pretty cool!!! 7/10

um.... any REAL crits?

sorry man, but you gotta tell me why its 7/10 but pretty cool