"Porno & Donuts"

[DrownedThought]

Ok, this is a song me and my friends made just for the hell of it... it has the same rythem as "I want candy" but instead mixed around a little bit... enjoy.

“Porno & Donuts”
I know of a **** that’s really sweet
Ladies are so fine; I can help but beat my meat
It has everything my fetish desires
I stroke it so fast it sets my hand on fire

Chorus: (in the rhythm “I Want Candy”)
I love porno
I love porno
I love porno
I love porno

Haven’t seen a porno that’s let me down
Ain’t no porno that’s gave me a frown
Its ****, that’s what my d*** ordered
So hot, makes my mouth water

[Chorus]

**** on TV, there’s nothing better
I like **** if it makes me bigger
Some day I’ll make my own
Then I’ll be called a clown

[Chorus]
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The edit parts is P-O-R... well you get the rest.

[GreenDayFan11]

LOL, that was hilarious. :lol: But you should make a song thats serious instead of a joke.
I'm going to post another song later today, please crit

[Mine]

I'm not too sure about this one. The stars throughout the song doesn't exatly get my mojo working. It is my assumption that you were trying to type words like "Cunt" and "Dick". ;)

[GreenDayFan11]

Thnx 4 review on mine...

This was hilarious gj... I was laughing my head off 10/10

[GreenDayFan11]

srry 4 double crit 4got i already reviewed it =)

[Biancazzurri]

haha it was i nice and successfull try to make something funny and so involved in life of most of us :) 10/10 for a style

[thedeadwalk!]

i don't usually like parodies and this is no exception. don't get me wrong, this is better than most the other joke songs on here.

you used some of the same rhyming words as i want candy does, which for me seems like i'm just reading i want candy again, not something new. also, the last two lines don't rhyme.

don't let this get you down so much though, i just have high expectations for parodies.

[DrownedThought]

Lol, well a paraody isnt suppose to be serious...and i never EVER use the word "*****" or "cunt" in my songs...i find those words repulsive.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

For a parody, not bad. For an idea, not good. They sort of balance out, but this type of stuff is never funny to me. Trust me though, it's much better than most of the other "funny" songs on here. Seeing how the pattern of the words is time tested, and goes with a music, it's not too bad.

[DrownedThought]

Ya... the songs i usually make you ether love or you hate them. I love your comments, i dont care if you like it or not, just if i did good on reaching the songs "purpose."