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Artman934
02-05-2005, 10:14 PM
Here is something ive come up with. I dont think its ready to be called complete and i need some help with tieing the ideas in together.
Its basically a song about forgeting about the past problems and doing whats right in the present and future.

Clear your mind
of all the things gone by
Dont let the spirit Dwindle and die.

You cant change the past
why even try
the future will come flying by

(possible Chorus?)
It seems to me
That
Everything you see
and
Everything you hear
shapes the way that things
appear

(possible bridge section perhaps?)
From the past to the present
To the future and beyond
The Sense of a mission
The Sense of right.

(pre Chorus)
Beleive in
what you see
And believe in
what you hear
Dont let popular opinion
become something that you fear

The hopless situation
Leaves another stormy night.
All alone in the darkness
With a sense of what right

jmusic4every
02-06-2005, 12:29 PM
I Get It Sort Of But What You See And Hear Aren't Always Right....
And You May End Up Repeating Yourself And Your Problems....it Shapes The Way Things Appear...haven't You Been Doing That Your Whole Life....the Media, Society, Right Now It's Crazy....i Think Stepping Aside From The World And Following What You Truly And Honestly Believe...your Sense Of Right Is A Better Idea If You Do Have Sense....that's Just For Me Honestly....but Your Song Is Okay Right Now....5/10