Nostalgia
02-05-2005, 07:14 PM
wel i posted a poem a while back and i got it reported back to me that it was ok but to cliche. Well i just wrote a new one that isnt really cliche or maybe it is its kind of hard to say, sorry it doesnt have a name but i kind of like it, here it goes
Steam factories
exaguast from the tyrants will
on behalf from steal to dirt
a thinking controdiction
a map that leads..
to a cave of dictator men women and factories
the city is of tiped toed cats
that bring new meaning
to a concrete city
thanks guys
Steam factories
exaguast from the tyrants will
on behalf from steal to dirt
a thinking controdiction
a map that leads..
to a cave of dictator men women and factories
the city is of tiped toed cats
that bring new meaning
to a concrete city
thanks guys