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spicey pirate
02-04-2005, 11:11 PM
well umm yeah i justed posting here and here is my first song i think its really good i put alot of time into it and i think it is full of whimsy so here it goes



oh yeah its untitled so i just call it the screamo song


-"The Screamo Song"-


RAHHH!
RAH RAH RAHHHHHHHHHH!
ROOOOOOOOOOAHH!!!
RUR! RUR! RU! RAURRRRAHHH!!!!


GRRRRRR!!

YEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAHHHH!

LAGGABLA BLA!!!


BLAHHH!
BLA BLA BLAHHH!
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BLA...?

spicey pirate
02-04-2005, 11:12 PM
oh i forgot to say PLEASE CRIT

ClayTheJ
02-04-2005, 11:20 PM
Good screamo stuff there, it reminds me of every single generic screamo band out there.

BlindWriting
02-04-2005, 11:21 PM
A lame attempt at humor.

BassManXtreme
02-04-2005, 11:22 PM
That is some beautiful, heartfelt, artistic linguistics right there.

20/10...I think I love you.

ClayTheJ
02-04-2005, 11:27 PM
A lame attempt at humor.
So pathetic you can't help but laugh.

spicey pirate
02-04-2005, 11:31 PM
A lame attempt at humor.

DUDE! that was better then most screamo songs ive heard i mean im a harcore emo guy my pants dont fit I CRY and when im alone i lock myself in my closet and smell the clothes from my ex girlfreind who doesnt like the songs i write for her about how she is the Xes to my Os in this life of tic tac toe (sweet that rhymed i gota a new song) and then i eat ice cream while sobbing in the dark SO HAH

Peglegsue
02-04-2005, 11:37 PM
disgruntled cheerleader?

ClayTheJ
02-04-2005, 11:41 PM
DUDE! that was better then most screamo songs ive heard i mean im a harcore emo guy my pants dont fit I CRY and when im alone i lock myself in my closet and smell the clothes from my ex girlfreind who doesnt like the songs i write for her about how she is the Xes to my Os in this life of tic tac toe (sweet that rhymed i gota a new song) and then i eat ice cream while sobbing in the dark SO HAH
...wow...

BassManXtreme
02-04-2005, 11:45 PM
That is some beautiful, heartfelt, artistic linguistics right there.

20/10...I think I love you.

This has been killing me...sorry, but I got to add...


SO WHAT AM I SO AFRAID OF!

Ahh....so much better.