Never Saw The End

[Nazman]

NEVER SAW THE END

VERSE 1
I saw the falling angel
As she fell down to the earth
Sad wings of destiny
In death begins rebirth

I saw the night turn so black
It made men cry
I felt the sorrow of
The one's who asked me why

CHORUS
But I never saw, the hammer fall
I never heard it land
I never saw the hammer fall
I never saw, I never saw the end

VERSE 2
I saw the soldiers marching
Marching off to war
Can you hear their mothers cry
As they fall down to the floor

Did you hear your sister scream
As your dad creeped up the stairs
Or , did you turn your back as if he wasnt there?


CHORUS
But I never saw, the hammer fall
I never heard it land
I never saw the hammer fall
I never saw, I never saw the end

[Peglegsue]

That was deep and good. Do you have music that goes along with your lyrics?

[Nazman]

I never write lyrics without music..I always have music..Otherwise they would just be other poems..

[Jonahtan]

Jeff buckley always wrote poems and then put music to them, it worked GREAT for him

[teleplayer101]

wow man that was good. really liked this part-

"I saw the soldiers marching
Marching off to war
Can you hear their mothers cry
As they fall down to the floor"

I give it a 9/10, great imagery. and i agree with u on writing to music. it sounds a hell lot better when ur writing to music, u need it to finish off the song. kinda like the icing on the cake haha, k ill stop. can u crit mine now thanks