Reeve
01-25-2005, 08:07 PM
Hey .. I wrote like my first song .. a bit ago.. and .. i was wondering how you guys liked it and if you have any suggestions and stuff. Please help me make this song good ;) .
They left me here.
This lonely street leads to no where.
Its empty its so bare.
There is no one to care.
They all wanna get on with thier lives.
There is no one to think of but them selves.
They work like little elves.
Thier dreams sit like empty shelves.
Chorus:
They left me here, on this lonely street that leads to no where.
Its so empty its so bare.
There is no one to care.
On this highway to no where.
When will they realize they left me.
Why dont they come back and get me.
When i think about it, im getting lonely.
Why cant they make it hows its suppost to be.
Who can help me escape this
How can they not stop and help me.
Who is gonna end it.
How will i feel.
Chorus.
What will become of me.
Where is this leading to.
What can make this better.
Where is the fill to this lonely, empty, feeling.
Chorus.
They left me here.
This lonely street leads to no where.
Its empty its so bare.
There is no one to care.
They all wanna get on with thier lives.
There is no one to think of but them selves.
They work like little elves.
Thier dreams sit like empty shelves.
Chorus:
They left me here, on this lonely street that leads to no where.
Its so empty its so bare.
There is no one to care.
On this highway to no where.
When will they realize they left me.
Why dont they come back and get me.
When i think about it, im getting lonely.
Why cant they make it hows its suppost to be.
Who can help me escape this
How can they not stop and help me.
Who is gonna end it.
How will i feel.
Chorus.
What will become of me.
Where is this leading to.
What can make this better.
Where is the fill to this lonely, empty, feeling.
Chorus.