TMA
01-24-2005, 04:36 PM
This is just something I've been kicking around for a while. I only have part of the first verse, but I would love to know what you all think of it:
Tear into my soul,
Cuts run deep as these memories bleed onto this paper.
Pouring out my heart,
Fearing that the end will be the sweet release from this perfect world you've built for me.
And yeah, there isn't anymore too it yet. I haven't found the time to conclude it. The song has no name yet, and no instrumentals. However, I have found that it works surprisingly well with the instrumentals to God Send Conspirator by Coheed And Cambria.
If you have any thoughts of suggestions, please let me know.
Tear into my soul,
Cuts run deep as these memories bleed onto this paper.
Pouring out my heart,
Fearing that the end will be the sweet release from this perfect world you've built for me.
And yeah, there isn't anymore too it yet. I haven't found the time to conclude it. The song has no name yet, and no instrumentals. However, I have found that it works surprisingly well with the instrumentals to God Send Conspirator by Coheed And Cambria.
If you have any thoughts of suggestions, please let me know.