mostly untitled......crit

[sexualchoclate]

crit plz. also ideas for a title

a starless night set against a silhouette
of the moon which never fears.
these hearts are broken,
shattered glass caused by this sin.

[ the chorus]
a red rose bleeds
for mistakes you made
is this something we`ll forget
but i don`t see
i am blinded
by the false hope in my head.

i plead with cold veins
and shaking sweating hands
and can you hear me
my silent cries
for deciet and lesser lies.
so i walk lonley streets
searching for the fake truths
that never exist.

I`m knee deep in distant memories
of a forgotten mind.
and i`m finished hoping
whats been placed before my eyes
beyond death i lie.