New Guitar DM song

[Stubb (a dubb)]

This is my attempt at a death metal song in powertab.
http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=203LII6O01ZBE3KK6ALA23D106

feedback please

[D'Angelo]

First of all what effect thing were u using it sounds lie ka banjo that is muted and 2nd it was very random stuff

[Stubb (a dubb)]

^Did you think the playing was any good?

[D'Angelo]

playing was good

[Stubb (a dubb)]

`anyone else?

[Metaljonus]

you had some cool ideas but it really seemed to go no where....but i liked it cause i like death metal :thumb: ya queer