Sergio
01-13-2005, 09:29 PM
Please, give your thoughts and such about these lyrics, it would be much appreciated to get some feedback on them, as I have almost no clue why I wrote them, they just came out of me at random, so, yeah, have fun.
"The City of the Dead"
16 years have come and past,
Now it's time to go.
Can't find the words to say,
Seen it all before.
Tears seem to fall like rain
This will never end
When you lost all the love and care
What have you got left?
In the city of the dead
Not a voice is heard
Shattered glass and broken dreams
I can't take any more.
In the city of the dead
No one knows and no one cares
It takes its toll on the weak
Who are never heard again
*note: Each of those are meant to be verses, with bridges/solos/jams in between each one, so the lyrics really don't have much to do with the structure.
"The City of the Dead"
16 years have come and past,
Now it's time to go.
Can't find the words to say,
Seen it all before.
Tears seem to fall like rain
This will never end
When you lost all the love and care
What have you got left?
In the city of the dead
Not a voice is heard
Shattered glass and broken dreams
I can't take any more.
In the city of the dead
No one knows and no one cares
It takes its toll on the weak
Who are never heard again
*note: Each of those are meant to be verses, with bridges/solos/jams in between each one, so the lyrics really don't have much to do with the structure.