Sweet stanza from one of my poems

[yes 70s r back]

i made this for one of my poems, it flows really well with the music.. its the chorus

A....
winter stitched witch
littered her glittered pinch
flitted o'er kindled lynch
like a frightened whitened nymph

[Sword2020]

I don't really like the rhyme scheme, but I like the subject, that is, if it is symbolistic, as I imagine it must be. It could go okay with something, but alone I don't really like it. Could you please crit my song, The American Dream? Thanks.