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pardonmepete
01-12-2005, 10:46 PM
This is my newest song and I would really appreciate some comments on it. Like it or hate it, I don't care...Just let me know what ya think...Thanks in advance.....

James Norman

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/jamesnormanmusic.htm

pardonmepete
01-14-2005, 12:18 PM
bump...

D'Angelo
01-14-2005, 03:06 PM
ita good jus the rythm gets kinda boring

8/10

pardonmepete
01-14-2005, 11:49 PM
Hey, thanks so much...You have no idea how much I appreciate you taking the time to type 8 words, 2 numbers, and a slash to seperate the #'s.....Out of 35 views, you have been the only person to take the time to do that. Thanks!

If you ever have anything you wish for me to listen to, just let me know.

BlackVanillaSky
01-15-2005, 01:43 AM
The rhythm got real repetitive after a while. Your vocals are nice though, they sound somewhat like John Lennon... especially in the beginning.

7/10

pardonmepete
01-16-2005, 01:01 AM
Hey, thanks for the feedback....what do you suggest? change the rhythm in the chorus...or add a new part to the song?