Please give me FEEDBACK on my latest song.

[RetroFit]

It's only a rough draft of my latest song idea ... be gentle.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/retrofitmusic.htm

It's the one entitled 'Heavy Metal song 2.0

I'm going to organize it better and work on the solo a bit (it's almost there .. still needs mucho work).

It's just me and my drum machine .. I've only been playing for 4 years without lessons of any sort so please be nice ... constructive criticism only.


Thanks

RetroFit

Note: In order to listen to the song, click the Lo-Fi link

Also ... the audio file is a bit quiet so you may need to adust your volume settings on your computer. :)

[FourTouchCombination]

My computer doesn't take that link. Maybe you should invest in a new one.

[RetroFit]

I copy and pasted it just to make sure but it works fine on my computer and my roommate's computer

[FourTouchCombination]

I use a mac :upset:

[RetroFit]

then there shouldn't be any problems at all ... Macs are compatible with pretty much anything ... especially audio files.

[FourTouchCombination]

Maybe your song is just to crap for my computer, because it doesn't work.

/thread.

[RetroFit]

that, or it's too good for your computer. ;)

[FourTouchCombination]

Whatever helps you sleep at night.

[BJ_maddog]

Please give me FEEDBACK on my latest song.

hskkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk *crackle* hsk hssssk hsssskk bwwoooooarrrrrrrrr
/feedback

It's very quiet. I can hardly hear it. Sound is only coming out of my left channel. Sounds quite generic.

So RetroFit is all about almost inaudible generic quasi-metal?

[RetroFit]

you got it

it plays fine on my computer and there's hardly any feedback on my speakers (just a little)


Also ... it's just me playing with my drum machine. I've only been playing for 4 years and without any guitar lessons of any sort ... hence the reason why I said "be gentle" in my first post.

:)

[FourTouchCombination]

Oh- well in that case, it did work- I just thought the weird crackling was the result of a computer error or something :smoke:

/is lying.

[RetroFit]

how 'bout we turn this spam into constructive criticisms of my song idea. :)

[amzharpyro]

I can't hear much.

[RetroFit]

then adjust your audio settings

[amzharpyro]

It's at the highest setting.

And this is advertisement. Do something mods.

[Electric Riley]

There is a whole section for these sort of threads. Can't remember the name... RetroFit is about being really, really quiet.

[RetroFit]

you guys are worthless. I'd get better responses from a home & garden forum.

[Electric Riley]

you guys are worthless. I'd get better responses from a home & garden forum.
Good bye, then.

[shaqadelic]

^^^ this forum is called a musician forum for a reason.. n00bies

BTW, threadstarter.. I am not gonna comment on the recording quality because anything that comes only from the left speaker at such a wuss volume is bad recoridng quality.

Onto the riffs.. they are not excitingly original. But they work as a metal-ish piece. Pinch harmonics and wide vibratos are a nice touch and it adds to the song. Ya should work on making the drum beats more interesting to increase dynamic and arrange the song better.

[RetroFit]

how 'bout the solo-type-thingy at the end? Does it fit? I updated it with a different version ... I'm not sure if it works.

Thanks btw for being the only mature person to respond.



also ... I don't understand why you guys can only hear it through the left speaker ... it's playing on all speakers on my computer and my roommate's computer.

[superpeer]

It goes HERE.

[RetroFit]

already is here ... not too many people respond here though buddy. I figured I'd get some responses if I posted it in a more popular forum, and it worked. Check out the thread that I posted in this forum .... 1 response telling me that the guy will post an actual response later on .... worthless.

[Janitor2]

It was the wrong forum to post it in, if people want to here your music they'll come in here.

[RetroFit]

they usually don't .... besides ... I'm not the type to wait around all day like some tool with no life for someone to answer my post. I like to come to these forums once in a while and get my answers quickly and promptly without any trouble.