Am I good or bad?

[Horatiu]

Please tell me what you think...

Lisen here (http://www.freewebs.com/horatiu911/dayidie2.MP3)

[Dork]

...maybe I just don't appreciate it.

[Horatiu]

what do you mean


any more thoughts??

[BassMan182]

what language was that?

[Inspired]

Hmm...

Guitar: A bit repetitive, sounds like a not bad chord progression but I think your rhythm could be tidied up to make it sound more cohesive and catchy.

Vocals: Again a bit repetitive, out of key at times and it sounds like you listen to a bit of punk and stuff like that? Cool if thats what you're going for but its just not my style.

Keep at it though, things can only get better!

Cheers,
Paolo

[Horatiu]

its not my song, its the day i die by nick olvieri, i dont care about the guitar part

I wanted it to sound punk hard core rock, dont want it to be pop punk

any other impressions

[Horatiu]

what language was that?



I don't think it was that hard to listen to.

[BassMan182]

not to be offensive but i did find it that hard to understand

[Horatiu]

oh ok, the rocording wasnt' that good and i was a bit too far away from the mic

[Epiphender]

I think you could have an awesome voice for this stuff, just learn how to use it.

[Horatiu]

How would i do that :P

btw thanks for the compliment






btw- 100 posts :thumb:

[Evilimmortal]

Not bad but the f.u.c.k thing is to Tenacious D not original....but keep it up


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[Horatiu]

haha no way man

really?

[Blue Guerilla]

Try not to batter the guitar too much, this ruins tone. Instead, just rela and you can still assert yourself just as much. The only difference hitting the strings hard makes is the fret buzzing, not really volume as such. If you need more volume, mic it up or use an amp.

The vocals are also promising, but it sounds like you are 'putting' on a voice instead of it being your own. Right now you may think this is the wise thing to do because you sound like the people you listen to, but get your own style and people will respect you a 453445656356345345 times more. Trust me.

Good work though, just keep practicing, it's the only way!

[filth and fury]

reminds me of kurt cobain...except 16 years old.

[D'Angelo]

Guitar- Its ok to much reaptness
Vocal- Sounded like you were moaning

6.3/10