Metal song

[Abbath]

Hi.

I just wanted comments on this song I made. The drums are made in Fruity Loops, so it sounds ****ty, but who cares. No vokals, since I can't sing. The song is " Random 3 " (just a working title). Link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/absenteemusic.htm

any comments are well appriciated (sp?). :)

[Devilinferno2]

intro reminded me of one of disturbed's songs.

into the "verse" : Bass would be good. Snare too soft. hihat too loud.

guitars really reminded me of dimebag's style. the cracky+screams.

not really outstanding for a guitar "solo", but i could imagine this with a good vocalist.

how did you get the tone of your guitar? Sounds a little phaser, quite heavy chorus + a metalzone.

[Abbath]

yeah, I thoughtit sounded like that disturbed song, cant remember what it's called. Probably gonna cut that thing out. And the hi-hat/snare thing: Dunno how to fix that in fruity loops. Bass thing: I don't have a bass...
Setup:
guitar<metalzone<amp<computer

[ExitSandman]

Well drums obviously are bad, especially since snare is barely noticable. Guitar is pretty good reminded me of ace of spades from motorhead. I think if you have a drummer that can play a nice simple beat and a vocalist, it would sound very good. Especially if lyrics were good as well.