Something_Vague
12-31-2004, 01:39 PM
Please, don't bitch about the vampire topic, it was a school project, so just do as usual and crit, and leave a link afterwards and I'll get yours.
PS: I'm not a goth, I ****ing hate goths.
An Attempt to Put Romance and Blood in Submission
The dark allies have blindfolded my vision,
In an attempt to put romance in a poetic submission.
"You break it you buy it, so why won't they buy my heart...”
Fate can be intertwined in the strangest ways on the saddest days.
"Odd meeting you here, kind of late don't you think?"
Her hair was jet black and long, seductive at nature.
The frost was feeding off her very breath as she spoke.
"What's your name...?” As her tongue gently wiped her glossy lips.
An exclusive beauty just out of reach, "We'll be together...”
"Maybe the night will find us again."
A midnight's chill sends my spine to tingle hoping you feel the same.
The glimmer of the moon off her placid blue eyes sent shockwaves through my lips.
"I love you...but right now I feel more alive than I ever did, than I ever will...”
"Well, I love you too, but right now isn't the best time for me to be getting involved..."
The sophisticated tone in which she spoke lured me in even further, I was her pray...
"Well, maybe we could go one just one more date, you know, to make sure it isn't right."
"Sure, I'll be ready tomorrow at ten."
She then gave a kiss goodnight and strolled away into the darkness of the park.
"Maybe the night will find us again...”
The hot steam off of ventilators from industrial buildings sped up my thoughts.
Unknowing of what could come next in the same dark alley in which we met.
"This isn't the most romantic place for a date. I was thinking a cafe or something...”
"Well I'm not your average girl, I like the dark mysterious places, and they suit me better."
Her satin velvet hair fluttered in the moist stagnant air, compelling me to ask her.
"I am what you expected, I mean. Do you think this will last forever, I'd hope it would."
"Well, we'll see with a kiss and only a kiss with convince me this is love."
So many broken promises end with a kiss.
So many forgotten lusts start with a kiss, a single kiss is all she wanted.
My endearing vanity compelled my put our romance and blood in submission.
My protrusions wouldn't let her nectar escape my grasp; she was mine, for eternity.
PS: I'm not a goth, I ****ing hate goths.
An Attempt to Put Romance and Blood in Submission
The dark allies have blindfolded my vision,
In an attempt to put romance in a poetic submission.
"You break it you buy it, so why won't they buy my heart...”
Fate can be intertwined in the strangest ways on the saddest days.
"Odd meeting you here, kind of late don't you think?"
Her hair was jet black and long, seductive at nature.
The frost was feeding off her very breath as she spoke.
"What's your name...?” As her tongue gently wiped her glossy lips.
An exclusive beauty just out of reach, "We'll be together...”
"Maybe the night will find us again."
A midnight's chill sends my spine to tingle hoping you feel the same.
The glimmer of the moon off her placid blue eyes sent shockwaves through my lips.
"I love you...but right now I feel more alive than I ever did, than I ever will...”
"Well, I love you too, but right now isn't the best time for me to be getting involved..."
The sophisticated tone in which she spoke lured me in even further, I was her pray...
"Well, maybe we could go one just one more date, you know, to make sure it isn't right."
"Sure, I'll be ready tomorrow at ten."
She then gave a kiss goodnight and strolled away into the darkness of the park.
"Maybe the night will find us again...”
The hot steam off of ventilators from industrial buildings sped up my thoughts.
Unknowing of what could come next in the same dark alley in which we met.
"This isn't the most romantic place for a date. I was thinking a cafe or something...”
"Well I'm not your average girl, I like the dark mysterious places, and they suit me better."
Her satin velvet hair fluttered in the moist stagnant air, compelling me to ask her.
"I am what you expected, I mean. Do you think this will last forever, I'd hope it would."
"Well, we'll see with a kiss and only a kiss with convince me this is love."
So many broken promises end with a kiss.
So many forgotten lusts start with a kiss, a single kiss is all she wanted.
My endearing vanity compelled my put our romance and blood in submission.
My protrusions wouldn't let her nectar escape my grasp; she was mine, for eternity.