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bwell1762
12-29-2004, 11:18 PM
The rug of darkness is under my feet
no one has gotten this far
your words are killing me
just another day

screams of darkness give me chills
your smile looks so fake
your knives are slicing me
just another day

chorus: you strengthen my hate with your words
Iím left walking towards the door
you donít know how this feels
as the forgotten lay under the floor

truths of darkness swim near me
they bring me secrets from the grave
they want to strangle me
just another day

(Chorus)

DrumBeginner
12-29-2004, 11:33 PM
I like it....Im new at this whole thing.....for a tite Id put
Another Day
or something

Mark. A
12-30-2004, 12:10 AM
Darkness under my feet, has that creepy feeling.

-Mark

scarlethawk
12-30-2004, 09:43 AM
thats a really good song you got there, bwell
i like it... a lot ;)

anyways... good titles:
Another Day (DrumBeginner's idea..)
Just Another Day (It's repeated throughout the song)
SSDD (Same ****, Different Day (it doesn't fit the genre, but it makes me think of that phrase))
Killing Vocals (you're saying that words are bad enough to kill)
A Screaming Dictation (same as above, its like how words can kill)

Nicktf69
12-30-2004, 11:42 AM
just like everybody the titleshould be called something or another day