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lord of darkness
12-22-2004, 07:37 PM
verse 1,2,3

Should it be the last judgement,
would you be the good person
Or the evil one who fooled us all
Perhaps the American president

The owner of a great company
Someone whoís quite wealthy
you and me loosing our personality
For a standard built by society

None of us will escape the last judgement
No one will be spared in this reign of terror
Pay for your crimes, blood for blood
Life for life, the reign of darkness is near

Pre-Chorus :
Your dreams will never come true,
World-wide peace will never prevail
Jealousy will always drive to war
And love will always morph to pain

Chorus :
Itís a world-wide genocide, a collective suicide
A pact signed by us to the advantage of hell
Welcome in a nightmare that will forever last
Embrace your destiny and be among the past

Itís the eternal reign of darkness
Forever haunted by our own crime
Weíre our own demise, selfish being
Full of hate and contempt

verse 4,5

Weíre fighting each others for a piece of gold
Killing someone to set up international peace
Your devotion and your loyalty for your country
Lies somewhere in between stupidity and naivety

Trust will lead you to your ****ation
And love will drive you to extermination
Donít believe in anyone , even in you
Nothingís right and all is wrong, itís true

prechorus
chorus

verse 6,7

Is this a war for freedom, Is this a genocide?
Is this killing someone physically or is it just me?
It may be an international war involving us
Or it may be an inner war raging across our mind

In fact itís the eternal struggle between good and evil
Itís their war ragging across our mind everyday
And it makes me pretty sad, but I need to say
In fact evil wins everyday, in the reign of darkness

musical interlude
solo
chorus(x2)
outro

lord of darkness
12-23-2004, 01:18 PM
bump...could anyone crit my song please?

shadowsfallon711
12-23-2004, 01:33 PM
this is a very good song i was going to goin indepth but then i eralized it was pointless because the only thing i didtn like was that it didnt kinda rhyme.overall good song i like the theme good job 7/10
can you crit the flashlight much apreciated

lord of darkness
12-25-2004, 08:06 PM
anyone else? I crit back...

Something_Vague
12-25-2004, 09:01 PM
Over-all this is pretty standard nothing ground breaking or spectacular, the whole punk war thing is really getting tiring writing wise so it is a bit bland once you listen to someone like Anti-Flag or something. The diction here is a bit cliched, as I've heard everyone of these words in just about every Anti-Flag song or a cheesy Nu-Metal song that is anti-bush. Also the rhyming is pretty lame, it is all expected and there are no "curve-Balls" rhyming rise, you need to practice finding unique rhymes that are hard to come by.

Check mine out if you could :)