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12-19-2004, 01:14 PM
Protagonist Challenge

silence invades the dwelling
causing seized melodies to vaporize
where once space endured delight
now lay abandoned

mortals await for the crusade
favorable ones tread forth
aspire for the honor
lost amid the chaos
honor is dead

sanctum sought
a journey is foretold
interior cognition calls forth
concealed illusions gather of disregarded paragons
emptied vases mandated

anguished confusion arrested
shaken off ambitions of youth require conclusion
terminal promises position themselves
engagement now commences in the fourth dimension
no time for withdrawal

nimble cerebrations asked for
canvassed judicious souls beckon for action
the fellowship awaits for ballast
you are the elect
upon the pedestal you wait for resolution

brush aside your suppressions
summon forth your courage
motivated determination required
the combat ensues for the protagonist
expiration not granted
you must deliver

a brother existed
immobilzed by your posture
altered conduct essential if you are to be whole
delayed prospects are foolhearty
Lacking in magnanimity you weep for all

emerge o'soul
come hither
honor looks with favor upon your noble deeds
if you turn now
emerge o'soul....emerge

12-19-2004, 01:23 PM
I deleted this for a reason. One song a day, read the rules.