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666th DesolateD Dream
12-17-2004, 12:00 PM
Laying awake at night drowning in my sweat.
Streams of inner feelings form playas on my bed.
Echoes of the nightmares sweap through the open mind.
Drifting through till daybreak then they hide away inside.

Endless voyage in the night.
Endless voyage through fight...between dreams and nightmares...

An Oasis mist of death falls down and toxicates the dreams.
Locked inside the reality with faces of my fiends.
Restless spirits fail to fall and die with in my head.
Everyday the clock counts down towards the nights with the living dead.

Burning nights.
Locked inside.
Blackened skies.
Burning nights.

Waking in the night scared to fall asleep.
Images of nightmares paint the walls i see.
Silhouettes of shadows stain the cage where i lay.
Eyes are loyal to my mind but my mind betrays.

Endless voyage in the night.
Endless voyage through fight...between dreams and nightmares...

Burning nights.
Locked inside.
Blackened skies.
Burning nights.

I look down on to my body.
Is this real or just a dream.
How can you tell which side your on?
Sanities lost like sound.

All the nightmares distorting my head.
How will i know if im alive or dead?
Twisting memories flash flood my eyes.
Freedom can't be found.

Burning nights.
Locked inside.
Blackened skies.
Burning nights.

Burning nights.
Locked inside.
Blackened skies.
Burning nights.

theredwonder
12-17-2004, 12:03 PM
my GOD! the poll says your song is 100% bad. and who is to argue with the poll? :smoke:

666th DesolateD Dream
12-17-2004, 12:05 PM
check again

theredwonder
12-17-2004, 12:06 PM
check again

you voted on your own song? :smoke:

/enough said

EDIT: ok, jokes aside. i will crit this when you learn to spell

morrissey
12-17-2004, 02:21 PM
O mi god?... u sed Oasis and ive herd o em soz that iz kewl soz i gave it brill?... this wuz gr8 stuff?

666th DesolateD Dream
12-17-2004, 04:14 PM
ok cheers. r we gonna try and get along then or wat?

morrissey
12-17-2004, 04:15 PM
yes, that's what I said... let's try :).

666th DesolateD Dream
12-17-2004, 04:19 PM
so....r u entering in this competition for lyrics then?

666th DesolateD Dream
12-17-2004, 04:58 PM
I dont understand how people can put Brilliant and trash unless they have sumthing against me which is stupid because the poll for 666th desolateD Dreams popularity contest hasnt been released.

jurialmunkey
12-17-2004, 05:41 PM
^^What the f.ck are you going on about?? A donkey speaks more sense than that.

Can I ask how old you are?

I'm always amazed at how easily people miss obvious sarcasm. Is it a brain defect? Can some people just not detect sarcasm? :confused:

morrissey
12-17-2004, 05:44 PM
^^What the f.ck are you going on about?? A donkey speaks more sense than that.

Can I ask how old you are?

I'm always amazed at how easily people miss obvious sarcasm. Is it a brain defect? Can some people just not detect sarcasm? :confused:

<3

you are officially awesome.

theredwonder
12-17-2004, 05:55 PM
Can I ask how old you are?

:eek: that is no sort of question to ask a lady! :smoke:

jurialmunkey
12-17-2004, 06:00 PM
Hahahaha :lol:

Mozza, I try my best just for you ;)

Burningwater
12-17-2004, 06:05 PM
anyone with 666 in their name can't be taken seriously IMO.

morrissey
12-17-2004, 10:19 PM
Hahahaha :lol:

Mozza, I try my best just for you ;)

much love :-* :lol:

mshort813
12-17-2004, 10:26 PM
Can I ask how old you are?




He's a 16 year old freshman in college.

Rats!
12-17-2004, 10:45 PM
Trash.

thirdeyeblindislit
12-18-2004, 12:37 AM
ok cheers. r we gonna try and get along then or wat?

See getting along is good for you. :thumb: Welcome to S&L I knew you would turn out ok.

666th DesolateD Dream
12-18-2004, 06:45 AM
wlol...hahaha. u all just proved how sad you all r. not including thirdeye person. lol. omg i just cant believe how sad you r its very funny. hang let me calm...................................

right then... so u were taking the mick for god knows how long and i wasnt even there? thats quite sad. really is quite sad. wow....im glad im none of u

hypocracy hater
12-18-2004, 07:06 AM
not the best but some good imagery