the need.

[burton.and.gas]

again and again,
all a repeat of whats happened before,
Behold man's greatest weapon the cliché!

stuck on repeat,
The mind convinces you that its new,
but it was really a combination of the old.

remember that time,
they had a new character on your favourite show,
but he was just some guy rebelling against the wrong things.

look around,
ppl are just buying a new version of the old,
why wud we wanna hear that again and again.

dont thank me,
for telling you what you already knew,
we have nothing to look forward too.

till one guy,
will stand up for himself and say,
our generation needs a saviour to make this better.

and one thing more,
colour has become an issue again,
so has sex, its like the wrong reincarnation.

so come with me,
as i express the need,
so become a we,
as we express the need,

we need to find a new kind of celebration,
we now live as the boredom generation,
the need has made us want to call,
to push the old ideas against the wall.
for an endless copyism to break down,
to find something new, we look around,
too many people express the need,
but no one plants the new seed.

[IOWNU200]

this was excellent. I liked your whole concept here. People do things that they think are new, but really are something that's been done before ect. Good idea. The song was pretty well written too. Each stanza kept me reading tille the next. I can imagine the ending sounding really cool in a musical setting as well. Good job on this

[thirdeyeblindislit]

this was excellent. I liked your whole concept here. People do things that they think are new, but really are something that's been done before ect. Good idea. The song was pretty well written too. Each stanza kept me reading tille the next. I can imagine the ending sounding really cool in a musical setting as well. Good job on this

Dont you love this guy? :chug:


Anyway, I would do a longer crit but my head hurts. Sorry. Anyway the song is good. I like how it flowed and to music, this should be a kick *** song. Nice Job. 9/10. :thumb:


P.S- Can you crit my bombs over baghdad part two song? Thanks.

[BlastFunk03]

excellent song, it came off very professional except for some of the spelling errors brought that down a bit. thats just nit picking though. the first line got my attention quite well, i apreciate that. i also liked

"so come with me,
as i express the need,
so become a we,
as we express the need,"

8/10