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MechanicalClockworkOrgy
12-15-2004, 04:46 PM
Mutiny Tonight My Friends

The sea is long, can’t see the edge, must walk the plank, must kiss the ledge.
Drawn your sword, use your might, were sure in for one hell of a night
Steal his parrot, steal his pegs, steal his hooks, steal his legs
cause it’s a mutiny tonight

Mutiny, the captains sure goin down!
Tonight we give em the big black dot, we plow him to the ground
Well tie up the scalywag, hit him with a rock
Grab your drink boys were taken him to the dock

The Horizons near, the sun is low, the thing ill miss is the oceans flow
Hopeless dreams of the king of kings will get you nowhere in the land of thieves
The island shore sure looks faint, the villages can hardly wait.
One Last raid before he falls

Mutiny, the captains sure goin down!
Tonight we give em the big black dot, we plow him to the ground
Well tie up the scalywag, hit him with a rock
Grab your drink boys were taken him to the dock

He runs ashore, we got his back, little he know there a knife in our pack
Soon will it rest, firm in his back, destine to stay for the rest of day
Until we remove it to hoist from a net, his skull will be speared to tie to the bottom of the deck
WE MUTINYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Tonight


this was for my pirate band
its suppose to have an ant goes marching in melody

MechanicalClockworkOrgy
12-15-2004, 05:53 PM
*bump*
please crit, then i promise ill crit whoever crits mine and more people

thirdeyeblindislit
12-15-2004, 05:55 PM
Yes! Why havent I seen this before! I am the biggest pirate fan you may ever meet. This song is awsome! 500/10 for you! :chug: :thumb:
Also can you please crit my bombs over baghdad part 2 song? Thanks.

Great job!

thirdeyeblindislit
12-15-2004, 05:57 PM
Now that song and tune are going to be stuck in my head. :thumb:

MechanicalClockworkOrgy
12-17-2004, 05:37 PM
please crit this, this is one of only good songs

Akehuka7
12-17-2004, 09:11 PM
Mutiny Tonight My Friends

The sea is long, can’t see the edge, must walk the plank, must kiss the ledge.
Drawn your sword, use your might, were sure in for one hell of a night
Steal his parrot, steal his pegs, steal his hooks, steal his legs
cause it’s a mutiny tonight

(I don't really get the last half of the first line. It just doesn't go along with the theme later verses too well.)

Mutiny, the captains sure goin down!
Tonight we give em the big black dot, we plow him to the ground
Well tie up the scalywag, hit him with a rock
Grab your drink boys were taken him to the dock

(I suppose this is the chorus. Nothing really wrong, but the last line just didnt do it for me.)

The Horizons near, the sun is low, the thing ill miss is the oceans flow
Hopeless dreams of the king of kings will get you nowhere in the land of thieves
The island shore sure looks faint, the villages can hardly wait.
One Last raid before he falls

(Nice second verse. Nothing bad to say.)

Mutiny, the captains sure goin down!
Tonight we give em the big black dot, we plow him to the ground
Well tie up the scalywag, hit him with a rock
Grab your drink boys were taken him to the dock

He runs ashore, we got his back, little he know there a knife in our pack
Soon will it rest, firm in his back, destine to stay for the rest of day
Until we remove it to hoist from a net, his skull will be speared to tie to the bottom of the deck
WE MUTINYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Tonight[/CENTER]

(This was a nice verse to finish off the song.)

Overall it was pretty good. 8/10

SantaDuJuan
12-19-2004, 10:49 AM
please crit this, this is one of only good songs


Collin. . .

Don't try to be The Cure.
Be Crass and be an anarcho band like mine!
Or an anarcho/reggea/2 tone band like my other one!

Anyways. It was good. Not my type of lyrics though far from them.

Your site sucks!
12-19-2004, 11:39 AM
i didnt read the song...but your sn kioks a$s.....i just watched that again the other day....william tell overturn in fastmotion orgy....good stuff...matter of fact, i just got droog pants...

Your site sucks!
12-19-2004, 11:40 AM
ok, now i read it....really good....like it alot