another friend

[theopengrave]

can i buy you a drink?
or can we just sit around and watch our tv's?
sex is a tool
that we use to get more sex
and around
can i speak to you now?
is there some remote to your body or will words suffice?
lust is a friend
that swallows our life
never dies
can i watch you breathe?
or can we just sit around and watch our tv's?
you never call
you never make it a point to be around
i watched my whole life in your eyes
and then i watched the re-runs
but after the credits had rolled
and after the drinking was done
the dust settles back to the ground
and sex is just lust in the end
and lust is just another friend
who stabs us everywhere
but our backs
as if to make a point

[Dingbats]

Since you posted it without spaces like that it looks to me that it's meant to be spoken. I guess it's not though.

It's good, I like it! :) Looks like a slow song.

[theopengrave]

thanks!

I don't get what you mean by no spaces though, care to clarify?

[SecretServiceAgent(A)]

He means the whole thing is just one big chunk and not divided into verses and stuff. Nice song though :thumb:

[theopengrave]

oh, right. yeah i only do that sometimes.

[theopengrave]

oh, and thanks!

[killfile]

Nice piece. I like these sort of spoken-word-ish chopped-flow things - they seem, I dunno, honest? The opposite of forced, I don't know the exact term. Anyway, great job!

[theopengrave]

thankyou sah!