Nalphe
12-05-2004, 11:28 PM
i wrote this poem yeserday night....
As light lies dead,
Thus ne'er to shine,
Dark clouds astound the starry-skies;
As black aquarelle...
Such tenebrific, though...
Black roses effloresce, pollen shatters upon the satyric swine...
Arcane satanic lust within,
Scatter'd like the gruesome wind,
Of feverish night with demonic might,
Nor a whore has a chance to disdain...
There'll be none disgrace,
But foxily gaze!
For each curve he dwells his lust upon,
Rapturing himself, down to sensual swoon,
Ne'er she shows discomfort or e'en a taunt,
But with glee she relishes, and make sweet moan!
He, who with the wild eyes on,
Beholding each and every single curve upon,
Prurient tongue licks as desire impels,
Drifting himself through the amorous tranquil dark night...
" O' what an alluring symmetry! " he cried,
Glimmering across the dim, so bright!
Her skin gently he fondles,
Her neck softly he kiss,
Her rondure lustfully he ravishes...
And with her thighs, together...he binds...
"Libidinous souls two yonder,
Embracing each other;
Neither will the air slips through in manner,
Nor any immortal force dare to break them asunder..."
thanks for reading....any crit/ comment??
also my earlier one: http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=271296
thanks again :)
As light lies dead,
Thus ne'er to shine,
Dark clouds astound the starry-skies;
As black aquarelle...
Such tenebrific, though...
Black roses effloresce, pollen shatters upon the satyric swine...
Arcane satanic lust within,
Scatter'd like the gruesome wind,
Of feverish night with demonic might,
Nor a whore has a chance to disdain...
There'll be none disgrace,
But foxily gaze!
For each curve he dwells his lust upon,
Rapturing himself, down to sensual swoon,
Ne'er she shows discomfort or e'en a taunt,
But with glee she relishes, and make sweet moan!
He, who with the wild eyes on,
Beholding each and every single curve upon,
Prurient tongue licks as desire impels,
Drifting himself through the amorous tranquil dark night...
" O' what an alluring symmetry! " he cried,
Glimmering across the dim, so bright!
Her skin gently he fondles,
Her neck softly he kiss,
Her rondure lustfully he ravishes...
And with her thighs, together...he binds...
"Libidinous souls two yonder,
Embracing each other;
Neither will the air slips through in manner,
Nor any immortal force dare to break them asunder..."
thanks for reading....any crit/ comment??
also my earlier one: http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=271296
thanks again :)