dont crit

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Ben Stivers
12/5/04

Backdraft

Caught in a backdraft
Flames swirl towards the ceiling
A rafter encircled in the blaze
And frail hearts fail to prevent its collapse.

Destiny prevents the slightest glimmer of a happy ending.
We've lost the words.
They escape our lungs,
As smoke in the air.

Arson, Ardor, Adieu.

[mshort813]

Is the thread title some sick joke to get us to look at this? Well, I'm not falling for it. :amaze:


Hey, youre almost at 2,000 posts. Nice! :thumb:


EDIT: wait, do you really not want us to crit this, this is so confusing? :confused:

[metaliq]

Since you asked so nicely...

(This may be a spot for critting in the future if you change your mind).

Also.. the pit has really changed you. I thought I knew you, but I dont.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

its like i said, dont crit it

btw i love your christmas lights :)

[morrissey]

its like i said, dont crit it

btw i love your christmas lights :)

done by me, thank you very much *bows*

[mshort813]

Since you asked so nicely...

(This may be a spot for critting in the future if you change your mind).

Also.. the pit has really changed you. I thought I knew you, but I dont.

You've been hanging out in the pit APS? You know what happened to Zep...dont you? :amaze: