Program

[angryfan#1]

this is one of my bands songs it isnt finished yet and im looking for some ratings and mabye an ending verse is you want to send me one go ahead.


Program

chorus
Program the nation program the world
teach me a new trick its all good
program the young program the old
teach them a new trick i think you should
thats what your doing isnt it isnt it
i can see your plan
nothing but a bunch of mindless slaves
all you can teach all you can

verse
your tvs your movies your radio
its all in your master sceam
your jobs your churchs your leaders
its all in your perfect dream
but some see thought it now dont they
one of those are me
and i cant take it anymore the others with have to see

[BlastFunk03]

take out the generic phrases, and make them more abstract. just whip out the thesaurus and change some commonly used words like: trick. plan. slaves.

but aside from that, this song was kick a'ss. 7.5/10