Metallic Symphony - Heaven and Hell

[Pointy]

This is the first bounce of a song I've been working on for the past day or two. I plan on adding a few guitar tracks when I get my guitar back from the shop, but it's pretty close to complete already, so I figured I'd get a little feedback. Thanks in advance for your listen:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/bleachedblankmusic.htm

[Pointy]

Anyone? (bump)

[Pointy]

I changed the ending a bit. Still no guitar, but I'd appreciate if SOMEONE would give me a comment.

/bump

[Guitar_fool]

Like the idea not so much the song

Good:
Nice Instrumental parts
Good Drumming
Like how its done

Bad:
Recording (work on the levels)
Take some or add more instruments
Have Diffrent Instruments lead

Ugly:
The Way of which it is done.

Overall i like the idea work on the song with like a school music teacher or someone along those lines and try fine tuning it. if you get a new song up make a new thread.
Good Luck :thumb:

[aguywithaguitar]

like it, especially guitarmageddon. needs to be polished, but the idea is good.

[bass_man87]

this song is wickedly awesome although i felt like i was playing a final fantasy game or something like that

still enjoyed it non the less

[Pointy]

"Good:
Like how its done"
or
"Ugly:
The Way of which it is done."

... confusion. Anyway, what specifically needs to be re-mixed (in the levels)? And any specific parts that need re-done, I'd like to hear. Thanks again guys.