Sick Soloing

[Roin McDink]

Hey can you guys please rate this solo for a song im writing, just tell me if u think its good and what i could improve on.

http://roinmcdink.tripod.com/unsolog1g2.wav


Thanks :thumb:

[Moss]

Tips and tricks...
A noise gate will get rid of that hissing and sine wave sound that's coming from your flanger or phaser.
Listen back to your own solo a few times and see if you can figure out which notes don't quite fit. Pay a great deal of attention to timing and phrasing (string bends, hammer-ons and vibrato). Once you're happy with your solo, practice it many times and experiment with improvising endings to your key phrases.
It's not quite right yet but if you build on it, it could be pretty cool.

[Metaljonus]

^^^^^^123

[jared]

tune your guitar... please...

[rik]

Wow, that hurt my ears quite a lot.

[Roin McDink]

yeah i agree it needs alot of work i kindda did a half assed job on it. thanks for helping :)

[Urfman]

yeah i agree it needs alot of work i kindda did a half assed job on it. thanks for helping :)

doesn't sound very nice. seems distuned.


Urfi
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/biloy.htm

[Roin McDink]

Ok I redid it a little different, still no noise gate but some sounds alot cleaner


http://roinmcdink.tripod.com/solo2.wav

[Slapping Penguin]

Sounds like the american national anthem

[WHbass115]

sounds like out of tune bag pipes