New ACDC-ish type song

[Foursticks]

hey guys i was messing around with harmonics on my guitar and made the intro and just kept writing....this song is kinda ACDC-ish and is all acoustic (just a rough draft) because i broke the D and A on my electric :angry:...anyway...its a cool little song...the intro is kinda weird...i want it to be weirder...whats some really weird effects or soemthing i could get in there...anyway take a listen and critique....thanks

link is http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/dizzyrhythmsmusic.htm (here) :angry:

[Foursticks]

anyone?

[Foursticks]

Updated and Electric!!!..take a listen to the new version!!

[shrunkenhead145]

the link's broke, man

[Foursticks]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/dizzyrhythmsmusic.htm

[zack]

I really liked that song man. It's really mellow :smoke:
Has a lot of potential. I was waiting for the guitar solo because it has an awesome rhythm track and when it finally came it did it's job.

I wouldn't change a thing man. Good job. Best tune I have heard hear in a while.

[Foursticks]

thanks man....all i need is some freakin lyrics ahhh....if ony i could write :angry:

[zack]

Just think of something that the song pictures. "Ride on" from Acdc could be some inspiration. :thumb: Even if it sounds dumb, keep it anyway.

[Guitar_fool]

I like it alot

Good:
nice distorted riff
Song scruture
Overall good song
Good solo

Bad:
Work on more diverse riffs.
verse riff
Work on low fret bends (like acdc)

Ugly:
recording

^^^ but you can work on that

overall good song i like it:thumb:

[Urfman]

thanks man....all i need is some freakin lyrics ahhh....if ony i could write :angry:

great stuff man!! really liked the riff and the way you started it off. you definitely need some lyrics behind it - maybe that'll help get some diversity in the verse. you have anything in mind?

my stuff isn't as 'hard' as yours, but check it out at

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/biloy.htm




Urfi

[Foursticks]

anybody else?

[rockONman27]

pretty gook, needs a little more work, some more variety,pretty good solo!

[glenn_danzig]

Woah, it kicks ***. :thumb:

[Foursticks]

thanks man

[mellowship stand]

i liked it- i didnt see anything wong with it

[Evil Clown Liquor]

Mucho awesome!

[RNR]

Nice guitar playing :thumb:. All it needs is lyrics and a name :p

[Evil Clown Liquor]

And by the by, I wouldn't describe it as AC/DC. It had much more of a heavy bluesy tone to it.

[TheSeeker625]

I dont know what genre it would fit in, but it's freakin awesome!

[Foursticks]

lol thanks man..anybody elsee?

[appreciate_it]

when you go down, and have a look at some other stuff, i really liked Jam Song. Personally i think it's a better song. Thats just me.
Good work though on the acadacca kinda one. Just something quickly, maybe not have that last note in the solo over where the music stops or was that a bit or a stuff up?

[zack]

And by the by, I wouldn't describe it as AC/DC. It had much more of a heavy bluesy tone to it.
Heavy ... Bluesy ... Tone ... ???
Not ACDC?

[80smetalkicksass]

Hey man! Great "ac/dc" Didnt really remind me of ac/dc but i really really liked it, that is original, and has spunk. I could totally see the lyrics and the singer... something happy but light and mellow, hope to see some more. do you have band or what? rock out.

[Evil Clown Liquor]

Heavy ... Bluesy ... Tone ... ???
Not ACDC?


When I said that I meant it was a lot slower than the usual AC/DC fare. :)

[Foursticks]

thanks for listenin guys...yea i only really called it ac/dc type song was really because of the chords...usually ac/dc chords...oh and at the end i wasnt sure where it ended so the solo was kinda messed up but oh well...thanks again guys...any new listeners?