Divine Ensemble

[bassaholica2004]

This is an updated version of a bass solo I have. I've turned it into an Ambient Black Metal song. If you've heard Burzum, thats what I was kinda going for. Its now a concept song comprised of 5 parts: Birth, Life, Disease, Pain, and Death. The distortion kinda sucks, so I'm gonna have to redo that, and I make a few mistakes, but this is basically it. Crits would be appreciated.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/artificialeternitymusic.htm

[bassaholica2004]

Nothing?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

the intro was great, i hate the offkey part you go into, it just sounds awkward... i dont think ill listen to anymore

[bassaholica2004]

What offkey part? Can you tell me what time its at?