Can't Win For Losing

[SethMcBride]

Can't Win For Losing
I know there is some forced rhyming but just look beyond that? :rolleyes:
and leave a comment please!

Verse 1
I've got two fingers up
You got four fingers down
My face has a smile
And yours has a frown

Cause when you're pissed
You don't want to talk
You don't care if you're missed
You just wanna take a walk

But I'm trying so hard
Just to be there for you
Cause when you're angry
Oh theres nothing I can do

But we'll try it this time
Yeah I'll leave you all alone
I won't cross the line and
I won't enter your zone

Verse 2
I want a good mood
Easier said then done
But with your attitude
We won't have any fun

Cause your trashy language
And no sense of feeling
You'll make me go crazy
And run on the ceiling

But I'm working so hard
So we can be together
But it won't go far
If you'll be like this forever

So come on now lady
Lets stop acting dumb
Oh quit being shady and
We can have some fun

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

songs posted = 8
crits given to other people = 2

reason why im not gonna crit

[morrissey]

:lol: .. I would have critiqued it too :(.

[SethMcBride]

okay ill go crit 10 songs then you people can do mine

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

only if its one of mine, because listening to your songs makes my ears bleed, let alone reading them

[morrissey]

:lol: APS, you make me laugh

[SethMcBride]

aw aren't you cute fa g

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

lmao, well at least i can sing/write lyrics/play bass/take criticism

sorry if that makes me a fag :P

[SethMcBride]

well i'm sorry if i can't do what you can , at least i try.. and i don't think telling me my songs make your ears bleed is critizism...

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

actually, it is... but ill tell you more about your 3rd song

playing the same bassline, with your voice that doesnt even match the melody doesnt constitute a song, nor does your drummer smashing a ride cymbal when you try and go into a chorus, thats not a chorus, thats called a really long fill...

usually a song is divided up into 3 parts, or at least 3 musical parts... i heard 1

please stop singing... or at least get a singer so you can actually do something constructive on your bass

[omgwtfboogie]

You should be a freestyle rapper.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

oh btw in the forum rules it says you should crit 3 songs before posting another... by my count that means you owe about... 21 crits or so?

/better get on that

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

You should be a freestyle rapper.

lol, no matter who that was directed to, you get rep points for it :)

[morrissey]

awww, APS... I <3 you

[SethMcBride]

i don't know why you people have to be such pricks ...cool online people i guess

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

im just trying to make sure you do your fair share of critting, if someone crits your song, you should at least give them the courtisy of critting one of theirs, even if they dont ask for one back

/respect must be earned, not given

[SethMcBride]

saying all that other s hit had nothing to do with me criting songs

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

the point is, maybe i wouldnt be such an *** if you would crit people back

[SethMcBride]

doubt it you seem like an ******* all around

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

and you seem like a ninny who doesnt like to crit people back or get dissed,

grow up and accept that if you cant do things well, stop doing them or people will make fun of you

[SethMcBride]

oh yeah..what can't I do well

[morrissey]

[robot mode]I've been instructed by my master to insult your song. So here I go.

Can't win for losing? You couldn't win if you tried. In fact, you couldn't lose if you tried either, you just do it by default.

So, based on that statement, it isn't your fault that this song is a piece of ****. It just comes naturally, and I forgive you for it. You could say the same with your voice: you naturally have no vocal talent, and that is not your fault.

But do you have to unleash these incompentencies on the world? Reading your song, and listening to one of them for that matter, was a waste of 5 minutes of my life. 5 minutes I will never get back. And typing this was another couple minutes I will never re-live. Unfortunate, really.

[Hadji]

Where did you get to listen to his songs at?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

www.purevolume.com/checkerclub

[morrissey]

www.purevolume.com/checkerclub


...as APS says, you might want to bring some band-aids along for your ears though ;)

EDIT: oops, but read my comment.. it's funny.. it really is...

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

stuff them with guass, that way youll already be prepared

/no mess

[SethMcBride]

f uck all of you! :) :wave:

[morrissey]

ohh gauze? yep.

[morrissey]

f uck all of you! :) :wave:

:rolleyes:.. bah du bum bah

[SethMcBride]

faggots

[morrissey]

faggots

I LOVE being called a faggot. APS, tell him how much I like being called a faggot.

:rolleyes:


:amaze:

[Hadji]

I liked it.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

yeah mozz, you d!ck loving homo

[morrissey]

yeah mozz, you d!ck loving homo


*bows*

Just doing my job... being a d!ck lovin homo :naughty:

:wave:

[SethMcBride]

thanks suburbia