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Rafiki714
11-25-2004, 10:35 AM
www.purevolume.com/1130curfew
Take a listen and review please!

slaxdif
12-22-2004, 08:19 PM
To start out I'll give each band member a couple words for improvement:

Guitar- Star involving some scales and not just chords
Drums- Some more fills
Vocals- I've heard worse, but I have no vocal ability so I cant judge you

I know your style is punk, but just because your a punk band, doesn't mean you cant have a talented band including some more intricate use of your abilities. (guitar and drums)

First song I was not fond of how the drums came in or their repative lack of fills and yes, you it wont cramp your punk rock style to include some.

Secound song I was disappointed in the repetitive lyrics that weren't that good, even for punk.

I forgot how the third song went, oh well.

Keep working at it.

Oh yeah, I do know enough about what I'm talking about and I hope you don't just discard this as a losers opionion.

Agent_Orange
12-22-2004, 08:27 PM
Your guitarist should make some riffs that aren't ripped off from blink 182....
lose the drummer.

slaxdif
12-22-2004, 08:37 PM
Your guitarist should make some riffs that aren't ripped off from blink 182....
lose the drummer.

Exactly, I just wasn't mean enough to talk about the drummer that way.

killfile
12-22-2004, 09:43 PM
The vocalist is OK for his age and for the genre - most 'young punk bands' have far worse singers - but you gotta realise he's still quite mediocre. Still, if he's all you've got, you could do worse - for a young punk band the kid is fine.
The guitar is boring, especially in the first song. I'm not saying that you should start doing blazing solos, but just because you're punk doesn't mean a simple power chord progression will do. It needs to be far more interesting.
Ditto the guys above about the drums.
For your age and genre, you are one of the better bands I've heard, but you've got a long way to go. Don't give up, keep at it. You have potential.

T0kyoRσs£
12-23-2004, 04:15 AM
OK at best...but nothing more. And your site...wow. A HUGE PROMOTION NO-NO=

DO NOT QUOTE PEOPLE WHO MEAN NOTHING.

The quotes...are meaningless. Who the hell knows someone off of purevolume?

You know who? NO ONE. And, it's not very professional as musicians to do such things..
But the music was ok...I guess I'll listen to that again when i want to "rock out with my _****_ out"...eh....

Maybe not.