WE RULE THE NIGHT (one for the metalheads out there)

[PTFROCKS]

:smoke: light em up and hit me with the crits

WE RULE THE NIGHT
(c)2003

when the sun goes down and the lights go out
we hit the streets, make you scream and shout
we'll let you know what evils all about
hear what i'm sayin' to ya

lock up your daughters we're comin' your way
don't try to stop us cuz we're comin' to stay
you'll burn in hell but that's the price you pay
we're gonna do it to ya

we are the righteous ones
satans favorite sons

(chorus)
we rule the night
we're gonna take this town, burn it to the ground
got you in our sights
so if you're hangin' round we're gonna drag you down
we are the wicked things you dream
that wake you up and make you scream
we rule the night

we hunger and your flesh will fill the need
the dark of night is when the demons feed
we wanna taste you, wanna watch you bleed
you know we gotta try ya

your body naked lyin' on the street
our sacred orgy feast on human meat
we'll do things to ya make your knees go weak
we're gonna satisfy ya

your nightmares comin' true
comin' after you

(chorus)

(bridge)(slower)
look into the shadows
thats the place we hide
take my hand and follow
i'll lead you to your darker side

(guitar solo)

your nightmares comin' true
we're gonna get ya

(chorus)

:evil:

[SethMcBride]

seems like it would fit into a metal song like you said... but it seems like you forced some rhymes and it I think you could go more in depth with what you're saying...good job and keep at it :thumb:

[PTFROCKS]

thanx seth...i'll keep that in mind.

[Dying Flame]

Wooo, reminds me of BB-era Exodus... \m/! Keep it up, metalbrodude!

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

hey man, i almost got a misfits vibe out of this, just add some oi oi oi's :)

anyway, your rhyme scheme in the verses AAA, basically killed it though, i thought it felt way too forced, and really hides your sort of demonish punk message (at least that looks like what you were going for), and since i did get a misfitsy (new word) vibe from it

7/10

[PTFROCKS]

ouch...not trying for punk in any way.. :eek: ..guess i'll have to rewrite...anyone have ideas?
thanx APS

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

no no it was good, jerk :P

/likes 70s punk :(

[PTFROCKS]

glad u thouht so... i like it myself, but not in a 70's punk style. it was actually written for a metal style...for which it seems to work with the music we are working on

did that last sentence confuse anyone but me :confused:

[morrissey]

I'm goth.

/not goth

This wasn't too terrible... its not a serious song, but I've read much worse around here... in the last hour alone.

6.5/10

[PTFROCKS]

not goth myself. and no it's not a serious song, you're right :thumb: ...something that popped out of my head a while back, so i wrote it down.
thanx for the somewhat kind words. :chug:

[morrissey]

*bows*... I do try, I do try. :smoke:

[PTFROCKS]

you do well, you do well

[bassaholica2004]

This seems like early Misfits work to me (listen to Die Die My Darling). For a Death Metal song, this isn't serious enough, for a Black Metal song, not evil or necro enough. It would definetely work in Misfits style. If thats how its supposed to sound, 7/10. If its supposed to be a DM or BM song, 4/10. Good work though, nice imagery lol.

[Kickflip_Burrito]

This reminds me, a lot, of 'Seek & Destroy' by Metallica. But the lines after the chorus are pretty gruesome.

[espf-250htd06]

idk kinda sounds like ac/dc which wouldnt make for much of a song lyrical

just not my style

4/10

[Kickflip_Burrito]

idk kinda sounds like ac/dc which wouldnt make for much of a song lyrical

just not my style

4/10

AC/DC??!!! What are you smoking?? Nothing like AC/DC!

[PTFROCKS]

This seems like early Misfits work to me (listen to Die Die My Darling). For a Death Metal song, this isn't serious enough, for a Black Metal song, not evil or necro enough. It would definetely work in Misfits style. If thats how its supposed to sound, 7/10. If its supposed to be a DM or BM song, 4/10. Good work though, nice imagery lol.
i wasn't really looking for bm or dm. just sort of a heavier metal, maybe in the style of seek and destroy like kickflip said.
and espf...definatly not ac/dc
thanx to all of you for your comments.
we haven't actually put music to this yet, although we have messed with it a little. i'm sure we'll find something that works. i play with some really talented guys. i am the worst of the bunch,(that's why they made me the bassist, i think) :lol:
thanx again to all

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

do it punk style with lots WHOAS and OI OI OIS!

please :)?

[morrissey]

do it punk style with lots WHOAS and OI OI OIS!

please :)?

Oh, APS, I <3 because of the 'tarded comments you make. :amaze:

[bassaholica2004]

i am the worst of the bunch,(that's why they made me the bassist, i think) :lol:

:angry: :angry: :angry: Whats that supposed to mean?

[morrissey]

:angry: :angry: :angry: Whats that supposed to mean?

I agree, I'm a bassist too :(.

/had to post in here one more time.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

roar

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[morrissey]

meow? :naughty:

postcount++

[PTFROCKS]

:angry: :angry: :angry: Whats that supposed to mean?it's like "bassist/roadie" right?
at least thats what they tell me ;)

[PTFROCKS]

actually...i am.... the other guys have been playing for 20 yrs plus. i just took up the bass 2 yrs ago, and never played anything before that. but they needed a bassist and i was elected. but i gotta say....i love it... and i don't know why i didn't do it sooner

[freakmeeko]

Eeek...I hate these satanic "evil" songs, but you obviously worked hard on it. For some reason I put it to the tune of some Scorpians song.

TOTPD!

[PTFROCKS]

Eeek...I hate these satanic "evil" songs, but you obviously worked hard on it. For some reason I put it to the tune of some Scorpians song.

TOTPD!

actually it all just kinda fell out of my head in about ten minutes. so i didn't have to work too hard.
and this is the only "satanic,evil" thing i'v written .
i don't think i would put it with a scorpions tune, myself. but i gotta know...
how did that work???
cuz i do like them, and if they can make my song sound good, maybe i'll sell it to 'em ;)

[warpigs2380]

At first I didnt know, but when someone suggested Seek and destroy, I reread it. I liked it quite a bit. I also got an early Maiden feel out of the lyrics too.

[Monkey:Dust]

The rhyming in parts did feel quite forced. I don't listen to Death Metal kind of stuff so I'm not really an expert on the subject but I thought it had good imagery even though the images were kind of gruesome. 7/10. Also I think you should have the "Satans Sons" line at the end. I liked that bit.

[PTFROCKS]

warpigs...thanx for the maiden reference. i can live with that :D

monkey:dust....i know the rhymes seem forced but i really couln't think of anything else to do with it...like i said it took about ten minutes and fell together like that so i just left it.
i also like the "satans sons" part......but then again i like the last two verses...they are my fav part of this song.

i am not into the death metal stuff, but this one felt right at the time. it will most likley end up in the style of seek and destroy.

thanx to you both for the comments.

[Raze666]

Metalhead, satanist myself

totally kick ***, loved it. I just imagined the song and headbanged as hard as I could until my brain was bouncing on the inside of my skull. keep at it

[PTFROCKS]

Metalhead, satanist myself

totally kick ***, loved it. I just imagined the song and headbanged as hard as I could until my brain was bouncing on the inside of my skull. keep at it

umm...don't injure yourself on my account. i'd hate to feel responsible :p

[Raze666]

umm...don't injure yourself on my account. i'd hate to feel responsible :p

No, I wont hurt myself, thats just my way of saying "Good work keep at it." I mean its not every day I find a song that makes me headbang like that. 2 :thumb: up

[PTFROCKS]

No, I wont hurt myself, thats just my way of saying "Good work keep at it." I mean its not every day I find a song that makes me headbang like that. 2 :thumb: up

glad u like, thanx