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yes 70s r back
11-20-2004, 05:18 PM
ok.. this is the worst quality, but its just a sample.. the first verse drags on but ignore that, lol.. i been playin for almost 2 years and i never took a lesson, so here is my sample...

please tell me any comments, thoughts or watever

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/theafflictedmusic.htm

The_Reapher
11-21-2004, 01:22 PM
yea overall its quite messy (especially the chords) so work on cleaning that up. The lead part right at the beginning is kindof false, but gets interesting a bit later where i can distinguish a melody, but then some parts which reappear are just false. It sounded quite ok at some areas, I think there is a good idea for the song, but as I said you just need to work on cleaning it up.

mordredozzy124
11-21-2004, 01:29 PM
Waaay too much distortion on the backing rhythm track.. the lead's ok in some parts, but it doesnt fit together too well. But you guitar playing skills sound pretty good for 2 years.

yes 70s r back
11-21-2004, 01:38 PM
ok guys, thanks
ill work on it =)