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drumass04
11-13-2004, 03:51 PM
ive ritten a song about war and its reely strong and powerful. I just need a chorus. It needs to be 1 line long and ill repeat it twice. It needs to be really powerful and emphasise the fact that war is just a loss
thanks
sketchyjoe
11-13-2004, 04:53 PM
How about "**** the war you dirty whore"
BlastFunk03
11-13-2004, 05:27 PM
No right! No reason! No fight! No treason!
guitarmaniattic
11-13-2004, 05:32 PM
It might be easier if you post up the song. Thanks!
sketchyjoe
11-13-2004, 05:50 PM
"Who ate all the pies? War makes you die."
"War leads to loss. I couldn't give a toss"
"War leads to loss. Make sure you floss"
"War happens a lot, and you could get shot"
"War is like Broccoli, I don't like it"
Electric Riley
11-13-2004, 07:01 PM
Big George Bubble Dew, cause the wars.
There was a war, people died.
War does not decide who is right, it decides who is left.
I saw the war, They died, I cried.

Post the song!
morrissey
11-14-2004, 12:42 AM
or you could write your own chorus?? It won't be meaningful unless you wrote it, that way it comes from your point of view and represents what you are trying to say, not just because someone else wrote it and it sounds cool/smart/depressing etc. etc.

That's the point of being a lyricist, isn't it??
morrissey
11-14-2004, 12:42 AM
"Who ate all the pies? War makes you die."
"War leads to loss. I couldn't give a toss"
"War leads to loss. Make sure you floss"
"War happens a lot, and you could get shot"
"War is like Broccoli, I don't like it"


:lol:But George H.W. Bush doesn't like broccoli... why the Gulf War? the world is too confusing for me :upset: