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BlastFunk03
11-13-2004, 01:02 PM
anti-emo song, complete with johnny cash and misfits references


Held hostage
By kids in tight pants
He wants to show her
How much he cares
But he cant because he doesn't
Do splits in the air
And he won't name
His band after a day
Or a season and they
Took away his reason for writing
Good love songs
And singing about
Things he thinks are wrong

An idol in black
With lyrics made
For a different time
His Vision distorted
Like a mission not
Rewarded

Friendships fall but the group sticks
Together through and through
Like soles of dark converse shoes
Broken picks
And a million crossed out verses
How the hell to finish this out
Nothing to do but shout

Was walking down the street
Saw lady that caught my eye
Brown hair was a
Top 10 ringer
That was no lie
I bit her bate
As she lured me
She liked 138 she was full of hate
And on her back
She wore muted black
But not for the despair
That those **** kids wear
For the death of blues
But for the always true
The crews and the boy named Sue


Friendships fall but the group sticks
Together through and through
Like soles of dark converse shoes
Broken picks
And a million crossed out verses
How the hell to finish this out
Nothing to do but shout

A_Perfect_Sonnet
11-13-2004, 01:09 PM
1 song a day

Far From Invisible
11-13-2004, 06:46 PM
Thats pretty cool. As much as youd like it not to be emo, i think it could be. Its very catchy.

BlastFunk03
11-13-2004, 08:33 PM
na its not supposed to be emo, its supposed to be against it

Far From Invisible
11-13-2004, 09:13 PM
Yeah, I know. Im just saying, it could easily be sung to with an emo background.

StormX
11-13-2004, 10:20 PM
Thats pretty cool. As much as youd like it not to be emo, i think it could be. Its very catchy.

Yeah, I know. Im just saying, it could easily be sung to with an emo background.

NO. and NO. Learn what emo is first.

morrissey
11-13-2004, 11:53 PM
But me likes emo :upset:

Anyways, this could be a good song if the lyrics didn't suck.

Useful comment, eh? Whatever, I am tired of typing out long responses only to be ignored. But, uh ya.

selftaughtbassist
11-14-2004, 12:57 AM
Not too poorly done, but why go out of your way to make fun of emo? I mean, I don't like the sound of emo, but have you ever read any hardcore lyrics? They are ALL emo. Listen to Nerdy by Poison the Well, and then read the lyrics.

BlastFunk03
11-14-2004, 11:37 AM
its more against the emo lifestyle and theme of being depressed and whiny about insignificant matters...

Lucky Lucy
11-14-2004, 11:39 AM
Hey Well Im A Newbie...
I Cannot Play tabs, Only Chords Has Anybody Got Any Good Chord Websites! :thumb: Thankies And I Am :confused: lol So Plz Post Back :chug: lol :cool:

Lucky Lucy
11-14-2004, 11:40 AM
Man I Need Some Chord Stuff.... [QUOTE]

morrissey
11-14-2004, 11:52 AM
uh, this doesn't belong here, I would go to to the guitar forum... but www.activeguitar.com probably has some stuff

smOKYthebear
11-14-2004, 11:54 AM
sounds like an emo song that is self contridicting

Burningwater
11-14-2004, 12:17 PM
^^
I agree, it's kinda hypocritical. If you're gonna criticize something, do it with style and point out all the weaknesses in a subtle way.
Subtlety is the key.
Subtlety is an odd looking word, who agrees?
Take a look at Void of Fear.