wat do u think about my lyrics?

[DRUMMER MAN]

hey wat do ut hink about my lyrics?....please crit
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Talk this through in a day or two,
Stop again just to think of you
Stop and think about the facts
The truth always knocks me back
Always seem on my own,
Looking back I should have known,
I know every reason why,
My hope again starts to die

Just you wait and see,
What is wrong with me?
Are you feeling low?
Im doomed to stay; Im going to stay, Im sad to say
Im alone

Now as I look at you from far away,
Dying inside, just to say,
How I really feel about you,
But I cant seem to get this through
To hold you would be heaven to me,
I know now that pain is free,
Talk this through every once and a while,
Still I cant seem to smile

Just you wait and see,
What is wrong with me?
Are you feeling low?
Im doomed to stay; Im going to stay, Im sad to say
Im alone
Give up this race, its pretty pointless,
Youre the only one, still with purpose,
Dont depend on my excuses,
Im like life, totally useless
(I only want the best, but just not now, this all seems hollow,
I dont know how, left in the sea, but I still wont drown,
I only want the best, just not now)

[morrissey]

I feel like I have been really mean critiquing over the past few days, so I will avoid depressing you with negative comments:

I only want the best, but just not now, this all seems hollow,
I dont know how, left in the sea, but I still wont drown,
I only want the best, just not now)
This part is passable! good job.

No comment on the rest... (ok, small comment: it's really been done before, lots of "surface" writing, cheap rhymes etc. I imagine you are a newish writer, If you would like some advice on some possible ways to improve, check previous posts of mine for comments that can hopeful help :)).